Make it fun first

I saw Iron Man 3 again over the weekend and I think I had an even better time on the second viewing than I did on the first. I enjoyed the jokes just as much even though I’d heard them before, and I picked up on some background stuff that I hadn’t noticed the first time. I even stayed to watch the after credits scene (even thought he credits may be the longest in the history of film).

It failed to answer the question of how Tony Stark gets his beard like that. Does the suit shave him?

It failed to answer the question of how Tony Stark gets his beard like that. Does the suit shave him?

I also got a much better idea that Iron Man 3 had some plot holes. Big plot holes…and yet it didn’t really matter because the movie itself was so much fun my brain just sort shrugged its shoulders* and went with it.

Now granted it wasn’t on the same level of plot hole as, say, The Fast and The Furious 767: Physics Takes a Holiday** but they were certainly there, but the excellent script by Shane Black didn’t worry too much about it…and it worked.

The reason I’m saying all of this is because the same principle applies to novels and short stories. Not that you should ever deliberately leave a plot hole in your story, but it is worth bearing in mind that reader that’s having a great time reading your book is going to be far more forgiving of anything you get wrong.

This is particularly important for new writers who can get bogged down by the fact that their work isn’t perfect and fear sending it out into the world because they haven’t made it as perfect as it seems to be in their head.

There’s nothing wrong with making something as good as it can be, but if the quest for perfection is stopping you doing anything at all then give this a try instead: shoot for fun to read instead of perfect. Then when it’s both fun and as good as you can reasonably make it at this stage of your career…send it out. Start the next one.

Make that fun too.

What do you think about this? Let me know in the comments.

*In my mind my brain has shoulders.

** I have faith that this exact movie will happen one day.

 

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Book review: Club Monstrosity by Jesse Peterson

Hi everyone, sorry I’ve been a bit scarce here over the last few weeks. I’m dealing with the general frothing madness that is my life, but the dust is clearing and I should be properly back in a few days.

In the mean time I have a new review up of Jesse Peterson’s Club Monstrosity over at BuzzyMag.com.

 

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Respecting your dreams

I was doing some reading last night on food addiction in Dr. Pamela Peeke’s book The Hunger Fix: The Three-Stage Detox and Recovery Plan for Overeating and Food Addiction and I came across a passage that I’m going to brutally paraphrase here:

If you have lofty dreams and goals, why are you still living in a messy house? Why are you wasting time on disorganization?

That question stuck with me. I am far better at organizing myself than I once was, but it’s still a problem. I waste a lot of time on being disorganized or on hunting for things in the areas of the house that are untidy that I could easily spend on writing. I could also spend it on training, or spending time with my wife, or on proper rest so that I can do all of those other things without feeling like one of the walking dead.

It got me thinking that just about every aspiring writer I know has either the same problem or a similar one. We waste writing time on stuff that’s not even fun. If you’re going to waste your writing time shouldn’t at least be on something that makes you smile?

So we exist in filthy work spaces. We procrastinate other tasks until the last minute and then half ass things in a last minute flurry. We spend hours watching TV that doesn’t actually do anything for us. Since I’m not a psychologist* I don’t have any great insight as to why we do these things. I do know there everyone is different, and if you have concerns about why you do the things you do seeking advice from a professional is probably a good idea.

All I can tell you is that this idea resonated with me, and I want to start treating my dreams and ambitions with more respect. There are two aspects to this: work space and energy levels.

For me, getting my house in order is going to be step one. I’ve spent my whole creative life working in a kind of flailing hurricane of stuff. I’ve been told that a mess can help the creative mind, but my creative mind has never been assisted by frantic searches for glasses, keys or pants. I have no intention of going completely Spartan, but having a good tidy workspace is going to be a good start.

The other is energy levels for writing. For the most part I’m okay on this one, except for the fact that I’m totally, utterly addicted to sugar. Sorting that side of things out I hope will pay dividends in terms of more energy for writing. I generally do get my writing done each day, but it’s not as good as it could be (or nearly as much as it could be) because I’m strung out on chocolate and sherbet** and lack of sleep.

So that’s my plan for the next little while, on top of my normal writing schedule. What’s your workspace like? Are you too hooked on sugary goodness/

Let me know in the comments.

* I wouldn’t even be allowed to play one on TV

** This isn’t some weird euphemism for actual drugs. I mean honest to goodness sugar.

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Review: The Blue Blazes

I review Chuck Wendig’s excellent Urban Fantasy The Blue Blazes over at Buzzymag.com. If that sounds like your kind of thing then you can check it out here. Enjoy!

 

 

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Where do you get your ideas?

I attribute them to a series of concussions I’ve received from a wide variety of combat sports and poor life choices.

 

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Rolling the dice and rejections

Make no mistake, rejection sucks.

It sucks like one of these. And this thing will suck the hair right off your face if you give it half a chance.

It sucks like one of these. And this thing will suck the hair right off your face if you give it half a chance.

I got one last night, and it sucked. It’s all very well for people to tell you that you have to have a thick skin, and that you’ve got to be tough to be a writer. That’s true, but it doesn’t take the sting out of the rejection itself.

But I had a thought on something that does help with dealing with rejections, and I wanted to share it and see what you thought:

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You will never run out of ideas

There are ideas everywhere. it’s in our DNA.

They're in there somewhere.

They’re in there somewhere.

I got asked yesterday if I every worry about running out of ideas…and the answer is a definite “no”. I worry about other things, like accidentally setting myself on fire or losing a finger to an axe* but running out of ideas has never been something that’s kept me up nights.

The reason is that the world is teaming with potential stories, all banging on my brain pan trying to get in.

I don’t get a lot of sleep.

For example: I saw this news story today and if there isn’t at the very least a short horror story about nuclear bacteria to be had out of this I have badly misjudged humanity.

 

I did worry when I started out that I’d only ever have one good idea, but as I’ve gone on I’ve found that execution matters 10000 times more than the idea itself. Yes you need ideas, but executing an average idea brilliantly will get you far further than doing a mediocre job on a great idea.

My suggestion to anyone worried about ideas is to change your focus. If you want to be able to pay your mortgage with your writing then focusing on the execution of your ideas will matter far more to both you and your bank manager.

 

The ideas will come, and once you start noticing the story ideas that are around you every day they’ll never stop coming.

* I came within a millimeter of that on the weekend. Still took a chunk out of my finger but missed the bone. Sadly this was not me fighting an axe wielding maniac, just a mistake whilst chopping kindling**.

** If you were wondering, yes, I am an idiot.

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Book review: The End of Flesh by Matt Wallace

It’s no secret I’m a fan of Matt Wallace’s work. If you don’t believe me take a look at my review for The Failed Cities and his short story Sundae. I say this because I might have some bias towards Matt and the things he writes.

The End Of Flesh is a novella, and reads as pre-dystopian detective noir. I say pre-dystopian because society hasn’t yet broken down in The End of Flesh but the signs are there that it’s coming. Food is short, starvation is common and some elements of society have broken the ultimate taboo; they’ve decided that it was high time humans were on the menu.

It’s in this climate of hunger and desperation that the story find Jon “Busboy” Pacson. He’s a police officer tasked with both fighting the rising cannibal problem and keeping it a secret from the public, because ideas like “eat thy neighbour with a side of fries” catch on quick. Pacson is an almost classic noir detective, although I don’t remember reading any other detective stories where the main character is constantly on the brink of starvation. Jon maintains a fragile balance in his career, but he’s still a good cop at which is why he can’t ignore the signs that there’s more to the most recent barbequed body to turn up on the streets than meets the eye.

Make no mistake; The End of Flesh is not for the faint hearted. People die badly, then some of them get eaten. The world Wallace has set up is absolutely believable, and it’s not much of a stretch to think humanity might see The End of Flesh become a reality within our lifetimes.

Wallace manages to balances slick action sequences with fast paced dialogue and a mystery that feels classic without being hackneyed. If I have one complaint it’s that I feel like The End of Flesh ends a little too quickly* and I would have liked to have learned more about the main antagonist(s). Even if it does come a little quickly, the ending is satisfying and left me thinking that The End of Flesh would make for an excellent movie.

If you’d like to check out The End of Flesh then you can find it at Amazon here:

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and now a word from someone whose face isn’t trying to murder them…

This is genius. I have all the sick at the moment so I thought I’d share some of Ze Frank’s unblinking genius:

UNBLINKING.

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Boston

Hi everyone, no real post for today. By now you’ve heard about Boston and the bombs that went off at the finish line of the Boston marathon. If you’re anywhere nearby please consider donating blood to emergency services as in times like this it’s always in short supply.

There will no doubt be a lot of speculation about this and I don’t want to add to it, I’d just like to express my sympathy for everyone affected by this tragedy.

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