Archive for July, 2009

I just put up a review of Janet Evanovich’s writing book, How I Write (written with Ina Yalof), it can be found here ready to please you.

6
Jul

When it all goes horribly wrong

   Posted by: Andrew    in advice

Sometimes you have a disaster of a day, or a week, or a month and your writing grinds to a halt. It can be very hard to regain your initial momentum and energy. I found that very much today where after a few things went a bit awry I found that facing the next scene just wasn’t flowing the way I wanted it to.

Still, time was ticking away and July 31st just keeps getting closer. Got to hit that word count! So I skipped ahead a few chapters. Not to the lat scene, but to the last big fight. Just about every book has this, from romance, to sci-fi to most literature. The big bust up at the end, the most interesting bit.

I wrote the hell out of it.

I can’t say it’s any good at all, I’m still too close to it but it was pleasure to write with that intensity, that focus. So my tip for today is, if you feel yourself stalling. Not stopping, but just slowing up, jump ahead to a fight scene. It doesn’t have to full on action, but cut to the conflict.

When the blood starts flying, literally of figuratively, then flow comes rushing back into my writing. Give it a try with yours!

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5
Jul

Whoops

   Posted by: Andrew    in News

As one of my excellent, observant friends, R, pointed out to me, I had a rough draft up in place of chapter two.  So for those of you who have therefore  seen the rough drafts of chapters three four and five, I hope you enjoyed them.

Sorry about the typos.

I hope I would’ve noticed but the truth is it would have stayed there until someone had pointed out to me.

Learn from my mistakes, check your posts!

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3
Jul

Beating Writer’s Block Part Two

   Posted by: Andrew    in advice

In part one I went over strategies for stopping the writer’s block when it was linked to you being over tired. This issue we’re going to deal with an equally common problem, and one that’s got a few easy fixes.

The Problem: “There ain’t nothing in here…”

While a lot of people experiencing writer’s block can attribute a specific cause to the blocked flow of words, the vast majority look deep inside for a reason and come up with…

Nothing.

There doesn’t seem to be rhyme or reason, you feel fine, you’ve slept enough, no one’s punching you in face (this was a problem for me at one time) but the words just aren’t flowing. It can be a feeling of frustration, or fear or just a general apathy towards your writing that leaves you surfing the internet for hours promising yourself: “I’ll get to it, just fifteen more minutes of lolcats”.

And looking back several months later wondering why you haven’t written a word.

Fortunately the fix for this side of writers block is easy, so easy that you’ll be kicking yourself that writer’s block ever got you down in the first place.

The Fix!

There are two I use. The trigger technique, a method of inducing a productive mental state in yourself. The other technique is the random word technique. Alan Fayter of www.optimum-mind.co.nz taught me the trigger technique from NLP (Neuro Linguistic Programming) and the random word technique is one I made up some time ago. Try them both.

The Trigger:

Pick a gesture. Any gesture, as long as it’s an unusual one (and one you can make in public without getting lynched). I pinch the thumb and pinkie finger on my left hand together but you can pick anything you like.

Normally the technique says to wait until you are feeling excellent flow in your writing. The words are coming out like magic and you love being a writer more than anything else in the world. Then, while in that state you fire your trigger.

Then do it again.

And again. How many times to fire the trigger is under some debate, I usually go anywhere between three and five times to make sure that the state I’m in and the feeling of flowing words are tied together.

Understand all that? Good. Now you need to know you probably won’t use it, at least not if you’re anything like I am. If you’re anything like me you’ll wait until you’re already knee deep in a problem before you do anything about, including writer’s block. So instead of waiting for the words to come to you, you’re going to go to them. Remember what it was like the last time you wrote like your life depended on it. Focus on that feeling, in your head. See what it was like. Hear the keys clicking across the keyboard, feel the energy surging through you as the words jump from your fingers onto the screen.

And if you’ve never felt the writer’s high before, imagine it. See, hear and feel what you think it feels like to be your favourite author working on a masterpiece.

Now that you’re imagining that feeling, or remembering it, now fire your trigger. Feel those feelings again, then follow up with the trigger. And again.

This may seem a little bit strange, but what did you think your favourite sports stars were doing when they performed their pre match rituals? Even if it’s unconscious, humans are programmed towards little rituals that help put them in a state that’s favourable to them. Why not take advantage of it? It doesn’t have to be hand gesture, any gesture or ritual you set up can be made into a trigger.

Writing pipes, old typewriters and favourite jerseys have been writing triggers for famous authors of the past. What you use is entirely over to your imagination.

Give this a try now.

The random word trick:

This isn’t as involved as using NLP to bring about a favourable state; it’s just a trick to fool your truculent brain into thinking you’ve already started writing, so it might as well participate. This is a good one for sudden onset writer’s block, where you are halfway through a chapter and suddenly you run out of words.

Grab a book. It can be anything, a cook book, an accounting text book anything. Open it and stab your finger onto the page. Whatever word you hit, you’re going to type that word into your manuscript.

The important part of this is that no matter which word you use, you type it out. It doesn’t matter if it’s wildly wrong for your paragraph, or even your book. The important thing is typing it and then looking at the word you typed in your manuscript. Just occasionally it’s the right word. If so, great, you are going again, type the next logical word in that sentence. By the time you’re three words along the path you’ll know where it leads.

That’s always great when it happens, but the real magic of the random word trick is when the word is wrong. Let’s say you picked (as I once did) the word cumin. Unless you’re writing a cookbook, cumin is unlikely to feature heavily in your story. Look at it on your page.

You know it’s wrong.

Your brain will tell you what you want to replace it with. Even if it’s just one word, that’s all you need to start again. Just one good word and you can do the trick again. Just as before, all you need is to get three words down the path and you’ll never look back. If you get stuck again, just pick another random word.

I hope these two strategies help you as much as they’ve helped me. Next time I’ll be looking at burnout, symptoms and cures.

2
Jul

When you’re too busy

   Posted by: Andrew    in Uncategorized

“I’m way to busy to write right now. I’ll do some more writing next week.”

Yeah, right…

I’ve said that to myself many times, and every time I’ve utterly failed to write anything in the alloted time. The strange thing about being busy is that it follows you around like a hungry hyena. If you’re busy today, chances are you’ll be busy tomorrow too. Busy people fill their days off with things to do too. My girlfriend is the master of this. Her weekend to do list looks like the first chapter of my novel.

The only time I have ever gotten anything done at all is when I have sat down, said to myself  “now is the hour” and gotten down to putting words on paper. You can find the time, no-one works twenty four hours a day (except Janet Evanovich, she’s a writing machine).

Don’t get me wrong, you need down time too. Without charging your batteries every now and again you can’t expect to write anything (unless again, you’re Janet Evanovich) and some days you really will be fighting for every second, but if Chuck Palahniuk can write Fight Club in five minute chunks of his work-breaks, you can get the words down too.

Just a short update today as I need to get back to following my own advice. I’ve finished another article on beating writer’s block, just waiting on permission to tell you guys about a great trick I learned.

1
Jul

Impossible Goals update

   Posted by: Andrew    in News, advice

It’s all going rather well actually.

I got to the end of chapter 5, and I’ve hit my word count (just). Now the bigger mission begins, finish draft one before the end of July. I’ve been mapping out he rest of the novel, so I know more or less where I’m going. I’m not a natural out-liner and new character ideas are making themselves known in the back of my mind so my outline and the finished product may vary wildly.

I just wrote up a guest blog submission for Nathan Branford’s guest blog competition. It’s an extension of my post on getting an accountant and bringing some extra money in. Either way it will be up on the articles page by the end of the week.

Thought for the day: Twitter, amazingly time consuming but strangely fulfilling

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