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	<title>Comments on: Want To Win a Copy of Story Structure Demystified?</title>
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		<title>By: Arlee Bird</title>
		<link>http://www.andrewjackwriting.com/2009/11/want-to-win-a-copy-of-story-structure-demystified/comment-page-1/#comment-168</link>
		<dc:creator>Arlee Bird</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 28 Nov 2009 18:13:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>My creative writing teacher at University of Tennessee, Robert Drake, used to say &quot;Everybody&#039;s from somewhere.&quot;  Kind of indirect writing advice, but it help give me as a writer better roots and helps me ground characters with roots.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My creative writing teacher at University of Tennessee, Robert Drake, used to say &#8220;Everybody&#8217;s from somewhere.&#8221;  Kind of indirect writing advice, but it help give me as a writer better roots and helps me ground characters with roots.</p>
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		<title>By: Robert Congo</title>
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		<dc:creator>Robert Congo</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 27 Nov 2009 22:22:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Write.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Write.</p>
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		<title>By: Matt</title>
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		<dc:creator>Matt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 25 Nov 2009 22:33:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Rather than littering writing with adjectives, throw in some powerful verbs.  Adjectives have a bloating, flabby quality.  Strong verbs annihilate the thorax of the reader.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Rather than littering writing with adjectives, throw in some powerful verbs.  Adjectives have a bloating, flabby quality.  Strong verbs annihilate the thorax of the reader.</p>
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		<title>By: Debbie</title>
		<link>http://www.andrewjackwriting.com/2009/11/want-to-win-a-copy-of-story-structure-demystified/comment-page-1/#comment-164</link>
		<dc:creator>Debbie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 25 Nov 2009 06:29:58 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Don&#039;t give up.  Never give up.
- Plex the Robot (Yo Gabba Gabba)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Don&#8217;t give up.  Never give up.<br />
- Plex the Robot (Yo Gabba Gabba)</p>
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		<title>By: Carol DeVaney</title>
		<link>http://www.andrewjackwriting.com/2009/11/want-to-win-a-copy-of-story-structure-demystified/comment-page-1/#comment-163</link>
		<dc:creator>Carol DeVaney</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 25 Nov 2009 05:26:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Love what you write, be persistent and write from the heart.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Love what you write, be persistent and write from the heart.</p>
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		<title>By: Beth Barany</title>
		<link>http://www.andrewjackwriting.com/2009/11/want-to-win-a-copy-of-story-structure-demystified/comment-page-1/#comment-162</link>
		<dc:creator>Beth Barany</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 25 Nov 2009 05:18:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The best advice I ever received was from a total stranger in Paris. She was a psychic. She said, &quot;Discipline.&quot; That&#039;s it?, I asked. Oui, she said. Now I&#039;ve completed 5 books, hundreds of articles, and surround myself with all things writing and books. It worked...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The best advice I ever received was from a total stranger in Paris. She was a psychic. She said, &#8220;Discipline.&#8221; That&#8217;s it?, I asked. Oui, she said. Now I&#8217;ve completed 5 books, hundreds of articles, and surround myself with all things writing and books. It worked&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Perry Lassiter</title>
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		<dc:creator>Perry Lassiter</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 25 Nov 2009 04:38:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Reading is the enemy of writers. Put down the book and write. Whether you feel like it or not. Write. From Ramsey Yelverton many moons ago.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Reading is the enemy of writers. Put down the book and write. Whether you feel like it or not. Write. From Ramsey Yelverton many moons ago.</p>
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		<title>By: Jinxie_G</title>
		<link>http://www.andrewjackwriting.com/2009/11/want-to-win-a-copy-of-story-structure-demystified/comment-page-1/#comment-159</link>
		<dc:creator>Jinxie_G</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 25 Nov 2009 03:13:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hmm ... Don&#039;t forget the sensory detail. I have a real problem with that.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hmm &#8230; Don&#8217;t forget the sensory detail. I have a real problem with that.</p>
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		<title>By: Cam</title>
		<link>http://www.andrewjackwriting.com/2009/11/want-to-win-a-copy-of-story-structure-demystified/comment-page-1/#comment-158</link>
		<dc:creator>Cam</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 24 Nov 2009 20:52:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>For me it was to avoid the excesses of stream of consciousness type scrawling.  An accurate reflection of what was in my head - yes.  Easy to read or possible to comprehend - no.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>For me it was to avoid the excesses of stream of consciousness type scrawling.  An accurate reflection of what was in my head &#8211; yes.  Easy to read or possible to comprehend &#8211; no.</p>
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